What Patriotism means to me!

I was recently invited to a 8th Grade awards ceremony. It was held in the hot, loud gymnasium of a middle school in North Carolina. The very first award that was given was for the best essay on What patriotism means to me. The winner received a check for 75 dollars and a pin. The contest was sponsored by the VFW.

I admit that I was more than a little shocked by the award, it was the last thing I was expecting and my opinion of that school went up several notches. What I was more shocked by was the winner. She was a 14 year old girl that had only been told she won an award, not what type or that there was a cash prize. You see the essay was a School assignment given in October of last year, she did her work to the best of her ability and promptly forgot about it.

After the awards were given I wanted to meet the young lady, I found her in the gym and spoke with her and her mother for a few minutes, I gave them my Email and asked if she would send me a copy of her essay. I received it late yesterday and when I read it I was moved. It gave me a hope for the future of our nation.

Below is the essay written by Nikki, last name is withheld because this is the internet and she is 14.

What Does Patriotism Mean To Me???
What does patriotism mean to me? I thank patriotism is love of country and willingness to sacrifice for it. Patriotism is in all our hearts. We may not always know it until the call comes upon us. Patriotism may be a disease, but it is one no man should have any intention of curing. It brings out compassion, courage, work ethics, and bravery in us all. In the Second World War, there was a shortage of workers needed to fulfill the cry for war supplies. Millions of women stepped up to show their love and determination for their country. They worked to fulfill a call that men could not due to war. Patriotism filled their hearts and gave them the bravery to do what was then a man’s work. Patriotism is why America leads the world. Men and women have a deep will to work and succeed. This disease is why Neil Armstrong stepped onto uncertain ground. He wanted to show the world that his nation had accomplished something no other had. He took the leap onto the moon to prove his patriotism.
Patriotism is the zealous love for one’s country. It’s like a disease that every man carries. It spreads from one soul to the next like an unstoppable wildfire. There is no cure for such a disease; for this is one of pure determination and pride.
The definition of patriotism cannot be defined by a dictionary, but by people. From America’s Founding Fathers to today’s courageous men and women of our military serving in Afghanistan, this disease known as patriotism fills our hearts with the will to protect freedom. Patriotism is what gave George Washington the courage to fight the super power of the world and take charge of an unstable colony. Patriotism gave him courage.
That is what Patriotism mean to me!!!!

After Nikki sent me her winning essay she called me.  We spoke for several minutes and I learned more about her.   She is one of five children, She spent several years in foster care until she was adopted about a year and a half ago. According to her father she works hard and gives her best effort at everything.

I asked her if there was anything she would like to add or say to those that read her essay. She asked me to add “Thank you to everyone that fights for our freedom”.

Today is the 4th of July. I think if our founding fathers could read Nikki’s essay  they would say to one another what we did was worth it. 238 years later and the children of our Nation still get it.

 

Well done Nikki, thanks for giving the older generation Hope.

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Swampfox46

Thank you for posting this today. After watching what is going on with the “adults” currently running the government, I needed to know that the younger generation still gets it.

Pam

Good job Nikki. I think you captured the essence of patriotism.

jonp

A copy should be sent to every member of Congress and the President.

What town or nearest big city is she in? If she is near me I would like to bring her to the attention of our Congressman for recognition

Rerun0369

I truly believe our nation is merely in a rough spot. It appears at first glance that this great and noble experiment is doomed to failure, but I disagree. The generations waiting to assume power and leadership in this country are ready, already millenials, that often derided generation are assuming their seats in the house, already they are reaching across the political divide to attempt to fix the problem beseiging the country. I have hope for the United States, we are not done yet, and I truly believe our best years are ahead of us.

MCPO NYC USN Ret.

E4U,

First, I want to see more of you here! Second, thank you for sharing this. For all the nay sayers out there … This young woman has proved them all wrong.

Good Bless American and its youth!

MCPO

O-4E

This should be read to Bill Ayers before he is beat to dea…er…I mean given a heart handshake and bowl of soup.

Thanks Green Thumb

Ex-PH2

Dusty in here.

George V

Too bad she’s too young to run for President!

Sparks

Enigma4you…Thank you for sharing Nikki’s essay. I am proud of her to the point of tears. Her essay gives me a sense of hope for our nation’s youth. She overcame so much and developed such a sense of patriotism it truly moves me. I hope she has a future filled with success and blessings. She is working hard to achieve her future. There are so many I wish I could read her essay to and then see their face when I tell them she is 14 years old. 14 years of age and yet years ahead in wisdom and insight.

Farflung Wanderer

Damn good essay. Good to know people are still getting it.

Things’ll get better, guys. I know it.

DefendUSA

Nikki…that was perfect!
Great job!!

31BNCO

Nikki did a fantastic job and I’m glad her efforts were recognized. The program that she participated in is the VFWs Patriot’s Pen Essay contest. It’s for Middle School aged kids and there’s a new topic every year. The VFW also has the Voice of Democracy program for High School aged kids. They must deliver their essays orally in the form of a short speech.
If you really want your faith in America and it’s youth restored, head down to your local VFW when they are judging all of the entries. It will renew your spirit to see what these kids do.

Nina

We need more of her. And I know where to find about 8 of them. My brother-in-law was a tank mechanic for 24 years. 4 tours in Iraq. Spoke at our hometown high school history class(we all grew up together). For his 50th birthday party this weekend, several of the essays were read out loud for him. Had to keep passing them around to other family members to read because we kept getting dust in our eyes and rocks in our throat.

Every single one of those kids totally understood what Pat said when asked what his greatest achievement was. He said (paraphrased) ‘it wasn’t awards, because I didn’t get any “big” awards. It was the work, the pride in doing something for our country, the pride in my soldiers, even the few close calls of tanks being blown up. But most of all I’m proud of every single day I served’.

As one kid put it in his essay, ‘He is a Patriot and Hero. I hope that I can be the kind of Patriot that he is’